Melltith Y Duwiau

Subject: Melltith Y Duwiau 2014-02-05, 3:24 pm

Character Name: Melltith Y Duwiau
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Fandom: Original Character taken from Lord Of The Rings Series.
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Alias: Joshua Bookman
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Apparent Age: Balrog form: Older than earth. Human form: 24
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Date Of Birth: Before Time.
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Origin: Wizards who were corrupted by the magic of Melkor.
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Race: Balrog ("scourges of fire, ... demons of terror.")
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Height: Balrog: 14'7". Human: 5'10"
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Weight: Balrog: 1067 lbs. Human: 148 lbs.
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Gender: Male
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Physical Description:
Melltith Y Duwiau Balrog

And

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Known Relatives: None.
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Religion: Himself.
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Skills:
Self Defense Novice (15/100) (Human)
Submission expert (80/100) (Human)
Torture expert (90/100) (Human and Balrog)
Summon fire weapons Adept (63/100) (Balrog)
Summon shadow weapons Master (100/100) (Balrog)
Sneak Master (98/100) (Human)
(Master allows for 95-100% succession with full damage and little drawbacks. Expert allows for 85-94% succession with close to full damage and little drawbacks. Adept allows for 65-84% succession with 2/3s damage and minor drawbacks. Apprentice allows for 35-64% succession with 1/2 damage and medium-large drawbacks. Novice 0-34% succession with 1/3 damage and large-devastating drawbacks. Drawbacks Ranking: Little: Off aim, not hitting the best spot. Small: Pulling a muscle, or delayed summon time. Medium: Fracturing bones or light internal bleeding. Large: Snapping bones or heavy internal bleeding. Devastating: Coma, death, broken bones, massive amounts of internal bleeding.)

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Abilities:
Transform from one form to the other (Takes a minute or two.)
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Alignment: Chaotic Evil
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Personality: In Balrog form, Melltith is grueling and unforgiving demon set to destroy what ever he sees fit. He has no personality as a Balrog because he does not interact with anyone in this form, unless he's fighting, and then he's still silent besides screams.

In human form, Joshua, when he is more human is a nicer guy and is willing to forgive and forget. He is non-destructive and pleasant. He has simple goals. He doesn't do too much to provoke anyone, and when in conflict tries to fix things before he is forced into his demonic form.

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Powers:
Can lift 31x his weight.
Can take up to 500 Del of pain.
Can sprint at 16 mph.
Run speed is 9 mph.
Has an IQ of 157.
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Restrictions:
He cannot do fire manipulation as a human, except light a lantern, maybe.
He cannot form any sort of magical weapons as a human.
He can only stay a human for 96 hours.
His shadow weapons are weak.
His fire weapons only rarely will appear when summoned.
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Weapons and Precious Items: Old tomes from centuries ago.
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Phobias: Spiders, reverse heights, and death.
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Illnesses: None.
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Sexual Preferences: Homosexual
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Occupation: Travel
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History: (A quick lore history: According to The Silmarillion, the Valaraukar (which were called Balrogs in Middle-Earth) were Maia (angelic being) that were "scourges of fire". They were seduced by the evil Vala Melkor, who corrupted them to his service in the days of his splendor before the making of Arda.[3][4]
Upon the waking of the Elves, the Valar captured Melkor and destroyed his fortresses Utumno and Angband. But they overlooked the deepest pits,[5] where, with many of Melkor's other allies, the Balrogs fled into hiding. When Melkor returned to Middle-earth from Valinor, now bearing the epithet Morgoth, he was attacked by Ungoliant, a spider-like creature; his piercing scream drew the Balrogs out of hiding to his rescue.
When the Noldor arrived in Beleriand in pursuit of Morgoth, they won a swift victory over his Orcs in the Dagor-nuin-Giliath. Fëanor pressed on towards Angband; but the Balrogs came against him, and Fëanor was mortally wounded by Gothmog, Lord of Balrogs. Fëanor's sons fought off the Balrogs, but Fëanor died of his wounds shortly afterward.[6]
In The Lays of Beleriand, The Lay of Leithian mentions Balrog captains leading Orcs: "the Orcs went forth to rape and war, and Balrog captains marched before".[7]
Tolkien tells of two Balrogs slain by Elves in the fall of Gondolin.[8] During the assault on the city, Ecthelion of the Fountain fought Gothmog, and "each slew the other." Glorfindel fought a Balrog who waylaid an escape party from the fallen city; both fell from the mountainside in the struggle and perished.
In the War of Wrath that ended the First Age, most of the Balrogs were destroyed, although at least one, the Balrog known as Durin's Bane, managed to escape and hide in "caverns at the roots of the earth".[9]) Melltith was one of the few Balrogs to survive and hid deep within abandoned dwarven cities, waiting for his time to return. After a time, and he mastered his transformation abilities, he reemerged from his slumber beneath his city and started to travel, learning of the new world he was surrounded by.
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Status: Alive

Admin Posts : 7752 Join date : 2010-09-17

Okay looks okay just a few things. Skills are for things such as things you can learn(I.E. martial arts, hacking. KI energy training etc) so the strength thing would go under powers, then you have to clarify or give a idea of how much. Submission and torture would go under skills.

You can edit it a bit later, just give a idea of his strength in demon form and it'll be good.

Subject: Re: Melltith Y Duwiau 2014-02-05, 6:41 pm

Better?

Admin Posts : 7752 Join date : 2010-09-17

The stats are confusing. I have no idea what stat system you're using for the numbers, since its not the one used for the sight. So the numbers, not too sure.

How about this. Since you weren't using numbers before, you use he can lifts a certain amount times his weight(in both forms) though of course since his human form is lighter it means in that form he wouldn't be as strong. I'll leave the amount up to you, but 20-40 sounds like a good even number.

Subject: Re: Melltith Y Duwiau 2014-02-06, 5:00 pm

I explained and fixed number problems.

Admin Posts : 7752 Join date : 2010-09-17

We'll all right. Approved.